I’m taking a break from “Won’t You Be My Neighbor” today to participate in Cassie and Hope’s “It’s Getting Hot in Here” blophop. But make sure you come back next week because the fabulous Jolene Perry will be here—and she really is fabulous :)
Here
is a little kissing scene from my MS. I love a kissing scene from the male POV.
Enjoy :)
“I would’ve brought you along.
You don’t need to charm me.” Taggert chuckled.
“Great!” Jocelyn’s face brightened as she moved away to
get her cloak.
He snatched her softly by the wrist. “Wait. I didn’t say
I don’t want you to charm me.” He
smiled as he pulled closer.
Everything about Jocelyn was soft—from the spread of dark
eyelashes on her cheeks to the sweep of her neck. Taggert ran his hands down
her sides and stopped at the turn in her hips. He sat in the chair and drew her
onto his lap.
His lips grazed the perfect skin of her collarbone and
her quiet breathing brushed through his hair as she kissed his forehead. He
could think of nothing but how every curve of her fit next to him. I want to stay like this forever.
Jocelyn ran her fingers through his hair and everywhere
she touched him—his skin sang.
“I love your hair,” she murmured. “The color reminds me
of honey.”
He kissed her chin and then slowly moved up her jaw to
the delicate skin behind her ear. “You remind me of honey.”
Jocelyn started to laugh, but he stopped her mouth with
his. He kissed her slow and soft. He wanted to remember each movement—each
second.
She sighed and sunk deeper into him.
She wants to be
here. His heart flipped in his chest.
Taggert reached his calloused hands to her face. Her skin
was so hot he thought she might melt beneath his touch.
Then her lips parted slightly and her tongue brushed his
bottom lip. A jolt rocked his body. This
is better than laughing—better than strategy—better than danger—better than
life.
Taggert kissed Jocelyn harder and faster now, and she
returned each kiss. The world was a perfect tangle—the smell of her hair, the
taste of her lips, the sound of her ragged breathing, the touch of her small
hands on his back—every second better than the last.
Jocelyn drew back from him—breathless. His wild heartbeat
echoed the rise and fall of her shoulders.
Fun stuff! Happy Valentines Day!
Now I’m off to find my hubby ;)
-Angie
39 comments:
That was an amazing male perspective kiss! I think I just fell in love with Taggert <3
*fans self* Wow, what a way to start a blogfest. I'm not sure if anyone is going to be able to out do this one. But I can't wait to find out. :D
Yummo. I too love it from a male POV. I had another option I was thinking of posting, that was a guy's POV...but I opted against it. Anyway, great excerpt! thanks so much for sharing ;)
Ooo, yummy! I agree. Love the male perspective. AND LOVE your new blog look!
YOWSA--this was GREAT! New over here *waves*
I think this is the best blog hop EVER! Love your scene. Umm yep, totally do:)
I love love love this scene. I think I gushed about it when I first read it, lol. Guy POV's are awesome!
Oh yeah. That's good stuff! Really enjoying all the kissing today. :)
This was excellent. It was tender and hot and detailed all at the same time. Great job! :D
LOVE this scene. Great job! And thank you for sharing.
Happy V-day :-)
I'm #52 on the hop.
Talk about a steamy valentine's day!
This is so sensual. I love reading and writing Male POV too.
Taggert is such a cool name. Your scene is very sensual. Well done, Angie!
So fun reading from a guy's perspective! He has a great voice :) And your writing in beautiful and steamy smooshed together! Happy Valentine's day Angie :)
Still love this scene. Taggert is so confident, Jocelyn didn't stand a chance. Hot!
Hot scene!
Love this line: A jolt rocked his body.
Aaah. Swoony stuff! "The world was a perfect tangle..." Sooo good!!!
Loved this, really liked the slow exploration and build up of it
I've seen the name "Jocelyn" a lot in writing recently. Sometime tells me that name is starting to get popular again. Loving the chemistry in your story here. Worthy of this hop. Nice one! :)
Wow, very sexy!
EEEEE!! I LOVE that you choose one from his POV.
LOVE
GO male POV's they are awesome! Love this scene. Each little detail is so awesome!
Great entry! Very hot and sexy!
Very sexy! I love it!
LOVED it from the male POV! Awesome job!
Hot tamales on fire! Nice!
Wow. SO. MUCH. TENSION. I just held my breath the whole time.
Wow! You have so many great lines in this. I got chills from the line, "His lips grazed the perfect skin of her collar bone." Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Loved this - it was such a great perspective, and the series of kisses building up the tension was fantastic.
I really enjoyed this one. Pulled me right in! :)
Great kiss and I could feel that flip in his chest. :)
I want to keep reading! So swoony and intense--love it! Happy Valentine's Day!
That was an intense kiss! Loved it.
Love reading about a kiss from the male POV. Great post!
swoon!
great job!
Humina, humina! *sigh* My heck! All this perfect kissing is killing me! This scene ROCKS! Honestly amazing! I think I'm in love!
I LOVE it! You got my heart rate to rise.
Wow! Great description! It's very vivid and engaging. I always struggle with description; in one of my first drafts I found that it was mainly dialogue with very little description. So it's good to read scenes like yours so that I can learn from them.
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