Leigh Covington, David Powers, and J. A. Bennett are having a fun blog hop. Check itout here.
Here’s
my entry—for my kids :)
If we’re quiet Mom and Dad will
never know. How can they think I’ll wait until six o’clock to see what Santa
brought?
It’s not fair. They’re my presents
after all.
“Do you think we should do it?” my
brother McKay asks.
“Yes…no…maybe. I don’t know.” I flop
back on my bed. All this thinking is making me tired.
The clock blinks…4:01…4:01…4:02.
My sister rolls over in her sleeping
bag. She’s snoring again. She’s even loud in her sleep.
McKay starts laughing.
McKay starts laughing.
“Shush,” I tell him.
“Should we do it?” He asks swinging
his footie pajama feet onto the floor, careful not to step on Sis.
I look at him.
He looks at me.
We both smile.
We’re brothers so I know what he’s thinking.
We’re out the door and through the
hall—too fast to be quiet.
“Shush,” we both say together.
We pause at the top of the stairs
We’re supposed to wait here and at
6:00 a.m. Mom and Dad will come get us. It’s tradition. Just like all the kids sleeping
in the same room is tradition.
I want to start my own tradition. Sneaking
to look at my presents. That’s my kind of tradition.
“Okay, be quiet,” I tell McKay.
The stairs squeak, and it sounds
like screaming. Why is nothing quiet when you need it to be? Stairs? Sisters?
I can see the lit tree. Now my heart
is racing…then I see a shadow.
“Hey boys. Whatcha doing?”
It’s
not to late to join. Get in on the fun. Thanks Abby :)
-Angie
22 comments:
Oh man, I am laughing out loud at this! You've truly captured Christmas morning. My husband makes fun of me because I practically have to wake the kids up Christmas morning cause I still get so excited. hahaha. Fabulous job. Thanks for joining in the fun!
I love it! This was so me and my brother, only Santa didn't arrive at my house until right before Mom and Dad came and got us out of our room. Apparently he knew what we were up to :)
I love this :) "I want to start my own tradition. Sneaking to look at my presents. That’s my kind of tradition." That made me laugh.
So funny! We have the same tradition too where we sit at the top of the stairs until our parents invite us down. We're in our early twenties and we still do it :)
This brings me back to waiting for my parents to wake up. They were kind enough to let us open our stockings without them. Good job!
I love his new tradition! That takes me back to my own childhood and that of my children. *sigh* Those were the days.
Love this. My siblings and I all slept in the same room too! And my kids are starting it as well! :D
Your kids have a great mom.
That is too cute for words! Thank for joining the hop :)
This was so fun! Definitely captures the kid's feeling about Christmas.
This captured two beautiful things: the bond of brothers (while including some sibling fun making a poke at the sister) and the excitement of Christmas mornings.
Wonderful job:-) I really enjoyed this.
Aloha Angie,
My brother and I had this tradition - until one year Santa was, er, late and our bicycles didn't make it for two days!
Thanks for bringing up a *good* memory, as I laugh thinking about my MOM stamping up and down in the attic, while Da tried to convince me that Santa had a flat tire.... (on a sled?)
Oh, I remember those days...
that was a sweet classic scene! love it!
Oh yes, kids think they invented all the sneaking round, don't they :-)
LOVE.
We used to set our alarms for an INSANELY early hour, and we could play with our santa stuff until Mom and Dad woke up.
Though, we all KNEW they were awake, but they were NOT getting out of bed before 6 am.
I think this bit of fiction resonates with all of us: Parents or children! :) Awesome job!
So cute! You did a great job at capturing the kids. My kids still wake me up. They run into the living room, see the presents then jump on our bed.
Kids. Gotta love 'em. hehe
Absolutely adorable!! Such a joy to read :)
Very funny. I remember a few of those moments as a kid.
This brought me back to my sneaking at the tree days. Thank you for participating! :)
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